You never know what the rain really means,
Just condensing of clouds is all it seems.
Its depiction is at times of joy or sorrow,
Whose bounds are like no tomorrow.
Some use it to conceal their tears,
Some enjoy it with shouts of cheers.
A broken heart it mends and heals,
Which then through smile appeals.
To me it brings utmost happiness,
An indescribable feeling to express.
Nature's most beautiful bestowing,
I call it God's showers of blessing.
- Veronica Angela John
9 comments:
veronica, your expressions bear the beauty of rain. I expect a lot from you.
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Some use it to conceal their tears,
if u cud elaborate here a lil more that wud have given ur poem a lil more depth re not that its not gud but u knw wat i am talking about dont you ??
yea i know.. but i want my poems to be simple and not too touchy that it makes ppl cry..:) i hope u get wht im saying..
I knw the topic tht u chose to write on is simple,but the way u expressed both the points of view, that is, of how ppl take it to express either pleasure or sorrow is wonderful. Really liked the balance! N yo its not at all too touchy...mast it is!
hey hun..rain...this was my request to you to express ur feelings on it and well u did a great job hun. I felt as if you captured my feelings and expressed in your words.. very close to what i feel...Simply Superb...
KEEP UP YOUR GOOD WORK....AND KEEP UPDATING YOUR BLOG WITH MANY MORE THOUGHTS OF URS...
GOOD LUCK
vera...awesome poems u rite not only this all of them...some how i relate myself to ur poems so it maks me more anxious to readthem...go on....waitin 4 more...cheers....love ya....
@safa-thanks baby.:)
@susheel- thanks hun..did it jus for u:)
@aditi- will keep writing more re and u better comment;)
Nice attempt at poetry...
Its soothing to the ears for sure !!
I say it as an attempt because i sense a lot more maturity and depth in poetry in your words....
So Aim for that and i bet you will reach that level you are made for.
Jack
Its really good dear hope you come up with many of this kind
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