Tuesday, December 9, 2008

My Dream World


I dream a world of my own freedom,

My mind always said and done.

Do what I want and say what I feel,

Caring a damn about any other peer.


My feelings understood and never condemned,

People standing by my side till the very end.

Where none correct my way,

But believe in them every single day.


Erasing every discrimination that is known,

Embracing love from dusk to dawn.

A free world I seek ever since my birth,

I wonder if I’d find it in heaven or on the earth.

-Veronica Angela John

11 comments:

PaRaDoX said...

My feelings understood and never condemned,

People standing by my side till the very end.

Where none correct my way,

But believe in them every single day.

my fav lines from the poem re great brain at work i appreciate it

Unknown said...

Awesome thinking..
Its like u have read whats in my heart.. tooo good yaar..
Keep it up.. :):):):):)

Sahithi said...

Nice one baby...!! Dil ko chu liya...

Unknown said...

heyy veron its really nice , all of us can actually relate to it.. who doesn want freedom?? awesome keep up the good work pal and keep writing more... cheers amigo mmmuahh!

Unknown said...

Hey my dingbatbum...sexy poem,u've actually covered all the aspects tht r left wanting in life :P

Veronica said...

thank u ppl..:)

Unknown said...

Are you somekinda author or something! I shld say fantabulous!

RoViNg VaGaBoNd said...

Are you somekinda author or something! I shld say fantabulous!

Veronica said...

thankiee :)

mickey said...
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mickey said...

hat picture reminds me of that song

standing on a mountain high...lookin at the moon thro a clear blue sky.i should go n see from friends but they dont really comprehend.i don need too much talking withoout sayin nythng..all i need is someone who makes me wanna sing....take me to your heart ,take me to your soul..gimme ur hand before am old..show me wht love is have'nt got a clue.show me tht wonders can be true

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